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Monday, November 26, 2007

On your Marks,Get Set Go!!!!!

She filled herself with unspoken accusations ……everyone took the center stage but her….so she made herself rigid, she never wanted to take a step back and see what situation she was in… …. …Mystification overshadowed all her questions …. But if she had to make a choice???……..Well, there was no choice..… Adapt or Atrophy ….and that got into her routine…and darn! She actually did pretty well.

Call it her smugness, as a girl she always needed to know the lay of the land before she threw herself into the fray. Building relationships took time….But !!!!!…An unexpected blessing from an unlikely place- something that she stumbled upon when she had decided its never going to come her way … He taught her the little wants of life and added to her little fantasies…He was a good person she knew, but not a saint….did they call it a lie if you actually lied to yourself???….. There would be more to it …only time would tell… no clock ticked, yet she heard one in her head…

She really did not know what to make out of him, he was so unpredictable well, undecipherable rather, she couldn’t ignore him, nor could she keep distance….but with all the odds, most important she was happy; she finally felt she belonged somewhere, with someone. If there was a cloud above number nine, she was on that. She wanted more out of life- she learnt as many of us do, that something amazing happens when you become someone else’s. A joy no one can fully comprehend until it’s personal.

He brought such light to her life, had shown her a different path without knowing the impact he was having.…..but then, hoping against all hopes she wanted him to stay in her life. Opinions were one thing but decisions without discussions are another…. What she did not know was that there was a lot of water under this particular bridge…………“A Fairy Tale, NO” his voice and her heart beats pounded in her ears.She hadn’t known what hit her until there was only silence in her head instead of him….

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9 Comments:

Blogger Priya said...

Beautiful piece from you Preeta. Loved it.

It was stunning, emotional and exciting.

U need to change my url girl. Its www.prjournal.blogspot.com

2:30 AM GMT+5:30  
Blogger Moderator said...

When u belong to somebody the joy becomes unbound! The more you give the more you get....that's the magic of true love!

7:06 AM GMT+5:30  
Blogger Rejil Krishnan said...

An accusation… is it? If she felt she belonged to him… it was her fault…. He behaves the same way with every gal he meets…he is neither a saint nor a liar..his character s moulded so….he charms everyone alike…she has to continue in the same path with a different person…and there she finds solace…. :)
Am I rite?
The pics are more than jus appreciable… kudos to Mr sandeep… emotions extruded from the frozen frames of life… words added to pics. Amazing combo… well written and honey dew smooth… I loved the pics more ths time…: )

3:17 PM GMT+5:30  
Blogger Life said...

You have gods gift in writting.

When u belong to someone ur feel very secure. right??

Take Care
Vikas{V}

7:48 PM GMT+5:30  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

A Saga.....Did it come a full circle though....where is the end?
If a "No" is for a Fairy tale then He was not the prince charming on the white horse whom she hoped would come one day to take her....

9:18 PM GMT+5:30  
Blogger Movie Mazaa said...

GOsh!
A great writeup with a simply smashing snap accompaniment!

Simply WOW, Preeths!

10:20 PM GMT+5:30  
Blogger Preetha Nair said...

Priya: Changed !! :) thanks n am glad u liked :)

Ekalavya:A barter system never holds good you see....Problem starts when expectation creeps......

Rejil:Yup! She takes all the blame smiling :)
....and about the pics please post them to the owner...I have hyper linked...click on the pics :)

Vikas: No such Gifts dude... :) :)
secure......hmmm only when you actually belong...else.......???

VOF::) if only I knew where it would end....right now its only silence.Period.;)

Velu: Thanks...:)

12:50 AM GMT+5:30  
Blogger Priya said...

Preetha,

Sorry girl :). I changed again as my google readers were unablle to subscribe. The last and final goes here: www.priajournal.blogspot.com

2:29 AM GMT+5:30  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Its gr8 to be of use in gr8 creations :-) The pics just meet the requirements and specifications of the author, who is the only creator here, and they have no meaning without her poem! My major contribution had been the heartlessness to brutally destroy a beautiful daisy flower, which I dont regret after seeing the post!

Unspoken accusations, I hope is not meant for 'him', since he comes in later :-) Am I rite, by any chance, Preethu? It better be ... since I read it so many times just to grasp atleast the meaning of the sentences :-) Thats y I took so many days to comment!

And I agree with the expectations part. True luv is obviously giving without expectations and to an extend stupidity atleast in this world. Real people wud always demand for more and will ultimately be unhappy if the luv is unrequited! Thats when true luv turns to true hatred.

But, still, the meaning of "A Fairy Tale- NO" eludes me! How the %&*!^*@ can a 'No' be fairy tale? Does that mean, she is still within the fairy tale and doesnt expect reciprocation from him?

12:53 PM GMT+5:30  

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